I just finished the chapter-by-chapter breakdown in terms of what pages are telling me what happened where. LOL (I may NEVER write without an outline again…talk about a pile of crap to wade through).
Anyway, now I’m trying to make sense of the MOTIVATION for each person…what each one WANTS, what they are TRYING TO GET–THEIR GOALS (everybody is trying to figure out their goals these days…even made-up people!). Once I know that, I think the story will take on a clearer direction…
It’s taking longer than I wanted, but it’s starting to make some sense, I think… ha!