Struggling with these edits. Have gotten to the love scene now, and everything sounds beyond stupid. Nobody does this stuff, and if they do I don’t want to know about it. Oy. I’m halfway tempted to trash the next bunch of pages and start over. Fixing it is just too horrible to think about. I tried to talk Shannon into doing it for me, but she wouldn’t. I even offered to pay her, give her my house…but no. Bummer.
I was just thinking about it…I have a lot of stories at the point of needing an edit. Five or six even, 3 of them full-length novels. Man, editing bites. The first draft is SOOO FUN, and all the rest is just plain trenching in a bloody rainstorm of pain. The next couple of months are going to bite.
Okay, enough angsting. I’ve got 10 pages left, and this story will be done. Just 10 more pages to wade through…I can do this.