Run to Love #sixsunday https://readmoore.com/blog/

This week’s offering is from Run to Love. I wrote this years ago when I was young and didn’t know a damn thing except I loved books. If I had the chance, I think I’d change the title. But I love the rest of it!

Regan held the gun on him, her hand trembling. “I’m going to get my sister and leave this house. Get out of my way.”

“Mallory’s not going anywhere!” He picked up the lamp and drew back to throw it.

The gun exploded.

For more on Run To Love, check this out.

To see the great sixxers, be sure to check this out!

 

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7 responses to “Run to Love #sixsunday https://readmoore.com/blog/

  1. Well, he can’t say he wasn’t warned! I love when a heroine takes charge.

  2. Action six, great pace I want to keep reading.

  3. Wow. Great six. Pacing’s great.

  4. What would you change the title to?

    • That’s a great question. Probably, I’d call one of my buddies and brainstorm–looking for something with suspense and sexiness and danger. My sister gives me major crap about this title…her favorite comment whenever she mentions it, “Run to Love, Bunny!” Why? I have no idea. LOL

  5. FANTASTIC hook! Way to leave me wanting more!!

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